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When Idols Fall

Was it the accusations of
that Neverland Ranch-hand
in unbuttoned pants
searching for your lost
adolescence...
we know you're "Bad"
it shines through
that ridiculous mask
and seen on the faces
of children hung over balconies
the innocent exploits of
a photo opportunity
while you moonwalk
your way further from reality
and further from anything
that could possibly
resemble human being

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Written January 17th, 2006

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  • leander Moderators member
    January 31, 2006
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    Very interesting and intruiging in fact you saw the mask of Michael Jackson in the picture well done!
    thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the very best!


  • rebeka
    January 24, 2006
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    oh my god, m jackson and a tribute to his mask! i am dumbstruck.

    what a fitting poem for this pic.

    i would have never thought of that, but now that i read this it makes perfect sense


  • wordsick
    January 17, 2006
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    I didn't realize you were a fan.

  • rishi
    January 17, 2006
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    That is pretty Idiotic thx Insead of something original you chose a pretty boring , personal and awkward concept, and as far as ur writing style is concern pretty ordinary opening, good middle part and poor ending