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Future Projection

(picture it)
the narrow platform,
spotlight,
just for you.
(smoky air)
share your
coffee scented
breaths
with the crowd.
light chatter
(intertwining)
with harsh chords
and a growling voice,
drumming bass
down the necks of
(innocent)
bystanders.
no one is left
(unscathed)
once you've taken
the stage.

Author notes

things in (these doodads) are originally italicized.
Written January 17th, 2006

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