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Fading

How pitiful a sound
  as your words
drown in my head.
   Hallucinated images
 splashed
through out the sky.
  Delicate whispers
of a lonesome memory
   dancing between
reality and make believe.
  You're oh so beautiful
in front of me,
    yet that milky skin
 is so out of reach.
   And your fading away
     just like a dream.

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Written January 17th, 2006

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  • Question
    January 18, 2006
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    excellent.... sorry i havent been reading much lately... lotsa shit going on...

  • sweetheart4rain
    January 18, 2006
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    very pretty babe!..i luv it..beautiful words, but very sad..luv ya lots darlin..miss ya lots!..i had so much fun on at your party..luv yas
    -Britt


  • Painted Warrior
    January 18, 2006
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    This is deep, such sadness but powerful writing. Great work.


  • LemonDropAngel
    January 17, 2006
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    its sad but you did a great job