Everything is everything and nothing is nothing,
everthing is nothing and nothing is everything,
I really don't care about anything right now except
for that strobe light and the cd player.
I feel like nothing could ever hurt me yet I feel like
everthings all wrong, dude! I love this song.
I feel so good.............I wonder what's for dinner
I'm starving...........DUDE In the future everyones gonna
be gray because all the races will come together man...
Oh yeah! I feel like the happiest person on earth and I feel
like I could get lost in my thoughts and my feelings forever and
that everthings perfect and so great and nothing in this
world could ever harm me........except for a buzz kill.
Author notes
Written January 16th, 2006
A contest entry
- Trippin Balls by Black label.
300 points, ended February 26, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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so many things to say about getting high i thinks you manage to beutiflee capture one of america favorite down played past time - shits tight man.
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Gray is my signature color,lol so I long for the day! This is a write that reminds me of my youthful days of haze....I like it!
Deena
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Oddly enough I understand this. I really think your target demographic was a bit younger than me but you painted a vivid picture and even an oldie like me was able to pick up on it. I hope that doesn't disappoint you. I enjoyed it. Everyone being gray goes deeper than racial mixing if I read you right. Well done.
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Lol this is a great read man luv the structure of this piece and how you just said it like it is man.
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Nice
Well, if it means anything, this is probably the most...uh...unique piece on the site right now. I gotta admit, I like how you lost yourself into the music I mean, that's just how it is man. Strange, but unique is good, so great job. -
this wasnt exactly what i was expecting but thats okay.
i like how u jump from one thought 2 another... from philosophical
"Everything is everything and nothing is nothing,
everthing is nothing and nothing is everything" (awesome paradox by the way... contradicts itself yet makes total sense and makes u think)
"In the future everyones gonna
be gray because all the races will come together man"
to wondring whats for dinner and the strobe light and the moment and such...
i luv the mix, with all the dudes and man thrown in... iv never done drugs or anything but i think uv really captured what it might be like, the racing mind... (my mind does that already anyway) and everything.
i dont know about the ending, and
"I feel like nothing could ever hurt me yet I feel like
everthings all wrong" seems like the weakest part of this. other than that though, nice job. good luck in the contest! -
right on, this is awesome man. i get what youre saying.
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My brother's a buzz kill.
Haha that's so fucking true too. Everyone will be gray, except for racist people.
Great poem and thankyou for entering. -
Weed rocks if your into that stuff man...
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haha
buzz kills suck ass
In the future everyones gonna
be gray because all the races will come together man...
i loved that part.
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