A darkened glare,
behind demon eyes.
A devils stare.
His true self hidden beneath
a dark soul.
The person within,
pure of heart.
A best friend.
All lay beneath this darkened
soul, called...BRUJAH.
The light reflects
images and glimpses
of this heart.
This personality takes over, consumes
all that is light.
Do not forsake
that kind manner
in which he speaks.
It's not the Redneck, that you should fear.
It's BRUJAH.
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Hey Dave, I hope you like this. I tried to keep it dark and not too mushy. This is my tribute to the demon we all know as BRUJAH.
Written January 16th, 2006
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Very nice write you had done for your friend Brujah good luck in my contest
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Good job Patrick you did well with this one it shows a great insite behind the person for which it is about.
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Nice job! What a great piece, lots of great dark imagery and symbols. You just keep rolling out the great poetry, keep it up you are great!
Belle
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Loved the imagery on this poem. Definately gives off a nice, darkish feel. Loved it. Nice piece.
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Let me be the first to say congrads on another well written poem! You nack for dark poetry washes out the other competition (Im jealous lol) just kidding. But your works are way better than mine. I really like this opening, it's strong and gives a description I like. Very well done Ktulu!
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