I have bills to pay,
But my money's all spent,
So I'm having to offer
A room up for rent.
It's a little bit dark,
Without much of a view,
But if you like nature
This room is for you!
It's already furnished
With running water to spare,
It's especially nice
If you like lots of fresh air.
So if anyone's interested,
Check it out, come on down!
'Cause who wouldn't want to live
In a hole in the ground?
Author notes
If ignorance is bliss, why aren't more people happy
1. write an ad for:
*your hole in the ground
Written January 16th, 2006
A contest entry
- Many Options!!! Come and Check it Out!!! by kwallycat.
300 points, ended January 17, 2006, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I was just about ready to apply, but why move from one hole in the ground to another, you know? something like the fire to the frying pan or vice-versa. really cute theme for a poem and the ending did make me laugh! good luck in the contest!
Jo -
OOoo! this is great! I really liked it! Great job! Good luck in my contest!
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