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I Did it For You

I remember when everything
was still innocent when summer nights
Where about staying up one hour late
Now this is what life can bring

A letter on your table
Signed by my hand with love
Im moving from here you see
Ive packed my bags started the car
and I did it for you
Because theres nothing left for me
Because theres nothing nothing left for me

Can you remember how I was your first
You smiled and now Im walking away
Ill always be your best friend
Ill always be your best kept secret
Ill always be always be that girl
Think of romantic nights that never end
(Never ever end)

A letter on your door
Signed by my hand with love
Im moving from here you see
Ive packed my bags and started the car
And I did it for you
Because theres nothing left for me
Because theres nothing nothing left for me

You cant follow me You cant find me
Im not playing hide and seek
A movie and that couch
They wont bring me back this time so let it be
(Just let it be)

A letter by your necklace
Signed by my hand with love
Im moving from here you see
Ive packed my bags and started the car
And I did it for you
Because theres nothing left for me
A letter on your table
Signed by my hand with love
Im moving from here you see
Ive packed my bags and started the car
And I did it for you
Because theres nothing left for me
Because theres nothing nothing left for me
Nothing left for me

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Written January 16th, 2006

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  • Artemis Gem
    June 27, 2006
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    A letter on your door
    Signed by my hand with love
    Im moving from here you see
    Ive packed my bags and started the car
    And I did it for you


    wow-very sad...lots of emotion
    I like the repetition of the main ideas
    well written!
    keep it up!!!!

    pegleg


  • XsweetpeaX26
    April 6, 2006
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    daaaaammmnnnnn !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was really really good.... id have to say my two favorite parts are where youre talking about specific memories that youve had, a movie and a couch - ect - because it shows how much things can change in a short amount of time - its rather sad and i can very much relate - i also like the repetition of the " chorus " im assuming this is or will be a song? from the pattern- very very good.


  • GreyMist
    January 16, 2006
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    woh... crazy but it's depressing to read just imagine listening to... e-gads nope i'ld have to say i would cry love you!!!


  • January 16, 2006
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    I love this poem. I like the structure a lot!