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reaper of souls





why do you treat me this way
your callous and evil i just wish you'd go away
i often dream the death of you
it brings joy to my face
but thats not the half off it
i want you rid of human race

the way you apparently love me
well that is just a joke
you kiss me and hug me
but i just wanna choke

your evil but so am i
well i must be
to be living this lie

i treat you like a lady more often than not
i treat you with respect an awfully lot
but your smart answers
and cocky smile
your evil eyes
and the hundreds of lies
they are getting me to the point where I'm gonna break

if i could turn back time i would never see you
if i could change the way i am
then i would be someone new

well i sit here and wait for the bells to toll
reflecting on my past life
of what it once was
now the gallows call
I'm waiting to hang
i look back at you all and smile

goodbye my loves and friends
and goodbye you bitch
this
is
where
it
ends
.
.
.
.
................................


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Written January 16th, 2006

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  • Elfin
    February 16, 2006
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    These dark poems are not really my cup of tea and I find them very difficult to critique so I will give you applause to make up for the points that I have wasted, So sorry.
    BTW, the colors are very bad to read.
    Edited on Feb 16, 6:24 p.m. because ''.


  • masterblaster gold member
    February 16, 2006
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    Hi, very dark, the discrition fits someone I know,lol, it is very intense and filled with loathing, very clear thoughts, very very dark, all the best, Di