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This Song

Inside you know I cry
That’s why on the outside I seem shy
The only thing I say to you is ‘Hi’
And perhaps you get a rare ‘Goodbye’

As I swallowed my nerves I spoke
‘Why is it that you smoke?’
You replied with ‘Well it’s better than coke’
And for that you are the perfect bloke

You said to me as I walked away
‘You grow more beautiful every day’
I couldn’t find the right words to say
In fear of sounding too cliche

I wonder why you even looked at me
Especially as you said ‘This is very risky’
I didn’t realise that you loved me you see
Just thought that you were being friendly

I said ‘These feelings are wrong’
You said ‘But they’re strong’
I knew they wouldn’t last for long
That’s why I wrote this song


Copyright ©2006 Kat 'Lost Faith'

Author notes

A little weird maybe... yet most of it is true you see...
Written January 16th, 2006

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  • Debbie Hansman
    February 18, 2007
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    I liked this...I thought it was expressed very well!...very nice job!

    debbie