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Little angel is no longer here now

Little angel that what everyone called her
But what do they know?
They never know her like I do
They never come to her home,
They never come to her room.
Do they know that everyday they so called little angel got beat up by her own mother everyday?
Do they know that little angel tried to escape from her home so many time that she lost count?
Do they know that little angel is fixing to kill herself because she found there no reason to live?
Do they know?
Yes, they know.
They know everything but they do nothing to help
When I told others about what happen to her
What do I get for return?
A slap in my face
How can people be so cruel?
How can people know what happens but do nothing to stop this from happening?
Then one day in the news they said five years old girl jump off the bridge her head hit the rock
Everyone in the town gather in the church saying prays for her
But everything is too late
That girl is dead
That little angel is dead
No matter what they do or what they say won't bring that little angel back to life
Why brother to do the thing that mean nothing to the dead while you can do it when she alive?
Why people always regret when they can do something to stop this from happen the first time?
Was is because in their mind they think that little girl won't do something like that?

But now look at them 
Some start to cry while other saying things like, she too young to die
But no matter what they say and no matter how much crying they do
That little angel can no longer heard it
Now they live in regret
Regret they didn't do anything to help

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Written January 16th, 2006

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  • zillion
    February 19, 2006
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    very true. so many times people do nothing in situations where they could do everything. It is a very sad story to read, but also extremly real. Thanks for your entry,


  • February 1, 2006
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    very fine and i love you poem


  • bella2003-25
    January 25, 2006
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    Sad but True

    I really like this poem it is very sad but it is also very true you put a great deal of emotion into your poems and it is great to be able to do that. good job


  • January 17, 2006
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    This poem is so desperating. But a very fine poem and a fine poet touch my heart so will. Great peom

  • Eusebius
    January 17, 2006
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    Bravo!

    I agree with asiangirl, your poems are sooooo very sad!! Touching, moving. very fine!


  • wings of an angel
    January 17, 2006
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    Excellent

    this is sad, love the poem this poem touched my heart


  • MorningWinds
    January 16, 2006
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    Aw..this is so sad.*hugs*. Your poems always touch me,dreamer.Whenever I read poems of yours like this one,I feel that you're having a rough time in life.So if you need to talk,just tell me ok?I'll be more than happy to talk and help you Wonderful poem


  • DreameeDarlin2U
    January 16, 2006
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    I wrote a poem similiar to this "Secrets". Most of the time, signs are there.....but few want to do anything. They either shrug it off or say its none of their business. It's very sad.....all it takes is a phonecall. Anyway, sad but great. Your point is well taken...lets hope others listen. Thanks for sharing.

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