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Colors of Pain

My pain
Is a spectrum of light.

You see the cool blues of rain
Where I see the beginnings of a fight.

The copper red that intrigues you
Is a fire that I know to run from.

Golden plains you so long to roam
Burn at my touch.

Eyes of blue
Copper hair
Sun-kissed, golden skin

Seems like perfection?
You'll learn soon enough.

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Written January 15th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Walking In pAiN
    February 2, 2006
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    Emotion was flowing in this and so was a dark side. Great write and good luck in the contest. Thanks for entering aswell.

    ashley