'He' put us here without a choice
'He' put our thoughts into a voice
'He' made us in his image
'He' put us in a world without death
An apple from a forbidden tree
Caught in the act of curiosity
Pleading with 'Him' for forgiveness
They were thrown out to fend for themselves
Alone and cold
How to survive they were not told
Without the help of 'Him' and his 'love'
We survived
We tried to take things into our own hands
Trying to set things right 'He' drowned the lands
Drowned our people
Drowned our souls
A fresh start 'He' gave us
We were blameless
A new life
New people without sin
This Utopia didn't last
Sin returned like in the past
The world was again in despair
Crying out for help and freedom
'He' gave his only son to make things right
Taken in the night
'He' was killed
'He' died for our sins
How was 'He' to know
The world will return to pain and woe
No help is coming
The end is nigh
Who will save us?...
Author notes
Who is 'He'
Written January 16th, 2006
A contest entry
- Omg first contest by Jimmah324.
450 points, ended January 25, 2006, 7 entries
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lol i have a fan! yay! thanks for your comment i really appreciate it
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Excellent
Well judging from your poem you're a outstanding poet!!!! -
ahh i see
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Well if you read it properly you would see that God threw Adam and Eve out of the Garden of Eden and they had to fend for themselves without the help of God so yes they were alone...
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this is good, but i cant say that i think we are as alone as you think
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*sigh* very very good poem and i cant say any more about it because im to tired to think lol good luck in deh contest!
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