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Because I Know

My heart hurts
when I look in the mirror
Because I don't like what I see.

My mind hurts
when I think about my situation
Because I don't like how I act.

My soul hurts
when I lie
Because I know
that that's all I am.

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Written January 15th, 2006

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  • AMEgirly
    March 30, 2006
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    wow i can completly relate to this poem. i feel those ways all the time. well awesome job in expressing it in a poem