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Amber Like Embers

I met a girl
that played
a walking whisper
within my dreams
Until Charley
stole that sweet voice
away from me
Amber stings like embers
brown and beautiful
I’m broken
and my heart has been taken
into the reflection
that I’ve seen...
This girl became
a fleeting ripple
within the ocean
She became
a mirror that reflects
only the purest emotions
And this girl
has taken all of me...
I met a girl
that brings
the best of memories
and now I’m not sure
if we’ll ever meet...
But to this day
and any other
I’ll speak her name
as if my lover
Amber
sweet embers
Burning me forever
How could I ever
let you leave
How could you ever
stray from me

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Written January 15th, 2006

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