You grab the gun
It is the key
You pull the trigger
Now you are free
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short but it gets my mood across
Written January 15th, 2006
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feelings mixed i'm guessing. having such a short powerfull poem along side happy smiling suns. written in the third person makes me feel that it's not written for you that perhaps you are writing it for someone else. then i have read one of your others where in the authers comments you state that even in death you are not free.
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This poem packs a lot,
Please take care
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yea i hope its one
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yea i guess with the whole backround and all, not to menton the words i guess i would also have found it funny
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Simple but it makes a whole lot of sense.
My friend found this first and for some reason found it funny, fell off her chair laughing then pointed at me and said "BANG!" Sometimes it's hard to understand her. -
Mangoriffic
Short but very expressive. I hope it's one of those passing moods. We all have them sometime.
Edited on Jan 21, 7:50 p.m. because ''. -
talk to me
it will only make u happy to know that u ahve no moe problmes bur u will regret that of which u have done atleast a bit whats wrong crow -
that was great...but you better talk to me about why you wrote it...i don't want you to kill your self...please don't...you've helped me and now i want to help you...so please talk to me...ok???...ttyl...<3Anna
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uhhhhhh crow? are you okay? no suicidal thoughts/ actions please. i'll miss you too much. lol.
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