MY legs look like silk.
My shoes feel like air.
My hair shines.
My back tingles.
All when I wear my little black dress.
Sleeveless.
I feel tall.
I feel elegant.
I feel free.
I feel me.
All when I wear my little black dress.
Cowl neck.
I am gorgeous.
I am head turning.
I am coy.
I am beauty.
All when I wear my little black dress.
Backless.
The men stare.
The women stare.
The little girls stare.
I Stare
All when I wear my little black dress.
Knee length.
Single pearl drop earing's.
Invisible strand pearl necklace.
Single strand pearl bracelet.
White gold watch mother of pearl inlay.
All when I wear my little black dress.
Author notes
Written January 15th, 2006
A contest entry
- Little Black Dress by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended January 16, 2006, 9 entries
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Nope, I was just asking 'cause typos are easily missed...
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would it make much of a difference if it wasnt? but yes it was intentional. thanks for the comment
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Aha! You mentioned the pearls. lol. That does not go unnoticed, as I have about five strands of pearls in my personal "arsenal"
Beautiful. Sensual. Well done.
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Nice, was capitalization of "y" in the first my intentional?
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