Bring me to life
Give me one last breath
Take away the darkness
Freed from this thing called death
Take the thorns from my heart
In which they do reside
Allowing me to see the light
Let my eyes be opened wide
To see that there is existant hope
That true love is on this earth
To know that life is precious
To be valued at greatest worth
To live my life free of fears
Of the shadows that always bind
Escaping nasty demons
Locked deep within my mind
To carry on day to day
Each morning start anew
Repairing all the shattered pieces
Of a heart that's torn in two
Help me past the bitterness
Take away years of strife
Allow me to breathe once again
Forever bring me to life
©2006 StormGoddess
Author notes
Option 3, song title Bring Me To Life
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Written January 15th, 2006
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350 points, ended January 20, 2006, 16 entries
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Comments
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AWESOME!
nice i love the ryme! it flows really well and i love the message! wow this is awesome and i can totaly relate. the vocab was excellent and it really helped to get the massage across. nice write and good luck in my contest!
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