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Demon Lover (adult content)

My lover is a demon
And he feeds my hunger well
He has shown my body heaven
But he sends my soul to hell

His fiery fingers pluck and pierce me
As his tongue licks at my core
I convulse at his caresses
Melting as I beg for more.

I must worship him with passion
Lips upon his phallic throne
Rapture burns as he invades me
No body part is left unknown

I wreath beneath his demon sword
Euphoric as he plunges deep
Soft skin held in greedy teeth
Crimson tears from nipples weep

Ravenous desire rips asunder
Thrusting bodies washed in sin
Penetrating forces ripping
I die - and live again

Thus I bond, with demon lover
Enthralled by my consuming need
Surrendering my essence
As he plants his demon seed

Patricia Gibson-Little

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Written October 3rd, 2002

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  • Old Doc Wit
    October 3, 2003
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    Wow Patti this is some serious work!Even with the strong nature of the piece it flowed well and the imagery,THE IMAGERY was vivid to put it mildly,very powerful piece!!!


  • AngelSeeker silver member
    October 8, 2002
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    Thank You... I'm glad that you enjoyed it.


  • introubleintx silver member
    October 4, 2002
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    Very good..Imagery is great...Good luck with the challenge.. :)


  • Stirrer of Stardust
    October 3, 2002
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    Well done! ~Sunny~