My lover is a demon
And he feeds my hunger well
He has shown my body heaven
But he sends my soul to hell
His fiery fingers pluck and pierce me
As his tongue licks at my core
I convulse at his caresses
Melting as I beg for more.
I must worship him with passion
Lips upon his phallic throne
Rapture burns as he invades me
No body part is left unknown
I wreath beneath his demon sword
Euphoric as he plunges deep
Soft skin held in greedy teeth
Crimson tears from nipples weep
Ravenous desire rips asunder
Thrusting bodies washed in sin
Penetrating forces ripping
I die - and live again
Thus I bond, with demon lover
Enthralled by my consuming need
Surrendering my essence
As he plants his demon seed
Patricia Gibson-Little
Author notes
Written October 3rd, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- You are f***ing a demon.
You are NOT being raped.....you want it, and are enjoying it IMMENSELY!!!! by Stirrer of Stardust.
100 points, ended October 7, 2002, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow Patti this is some serious work!Even with the strong nature of the piece it flowed well and the imagery,THE IMAGERY was vivid to put it mildly,very powerful piece!!!
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Thank You... I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
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Very good..Imagery is great...Good luck with the challenge.. :)
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Well done! ~Sunny~





