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Return.......

Alas,feet stepping
 unto the path already walked...
the familiar Grimm lurks
 once again...

Agony pinches hard
 to awaken the reality,
hidden so long...

 Love... ah, love
Good-bye once again...

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meh.....
Written January 15th, 2006

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  • transcendental baby gold member
    January 15, 2006
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    Aw Pi, I hope love isn't that hard on you Does love always have to hurt? I hope not


  • Taranand
    January 15, 2006
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    Another love under the belt ~ The poet returns with more love to speak of. Welcome back to AP. Let the "Great Muse" sooth your troubled spirit.
    Peace and joy, Tara


  • Pisces Pond
    January 15, 2006
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    Thank you... didn't think I'd get a comment so quickly

  • Dogstar
    January 15, 2006
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    Awesome

    Lol...Don't try to hold it or build illusion on it , just shut the door quick , it will go away . You don't have to walk there , sometimes its nicer just to gaze longley from afar , less painfull to . Dog
    Edited on Jan 15, 5:39 p.m. because ''.