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Inside

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What beauty
Made
This place.
Lined of rose
Petal softness,
Musk scented
Entrapment.

Glimpsed.

Through guarded
Caramelization
She drowned
Here
In tense passed.

Never allowed
To sink beneath.
She would
Float here for
Eternity.
Waiting

To be called
Below

She hears the
Song
It whispers to her.
Reaching arms
Longing still
To be drawn
Within


She knows
As she knows herself
That here
Tenderness
Would envelope

Forever

Sealing

Promise


No thought to
Abandon
Nor disfigure


She waits
As she always
Has

To be invited



She waits
As she always
Has

To be wanted




She waits
As she always will
To be called

Home
















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Author notes

yeah yeah I know... another one of those I seem to enjoy playing with at the moment...




Written January 15th, 2006

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  • Emmerson
    January 16, 2006
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    Beautiful

    Sigh... I think that all any she wants... "To be invited home", what a lovely emotive write Bec. Left me with little tears in my eyes *sniff*

    God maybe I need a home too