Tears are rolling down my face. Melting on my lips, the place where yours should be right now. My arms are crossed against my broken heart. They should be around you and my heart should be swelling with happiness. But no. It went all wrong. Who's fault was it? What happened? I don't know and you probably don't either because you're avoiding the question, avoiding me. I hope you feel as bad as I do right now. I hope you feel as empty as I feel. I hope you can't sleep at night, because your pillow is soaked with tears, the way mine is. I was flying high above the clouds then came crashing back down to the earth and fell lower and lower and lower. And here I still I am, sitting here, lonely, cold and alone regretting all those good times we had together. So much for loving you forever, I hope you're happy now. I know I made mistakes. I didn't understand back then, but now I do. I've been so naive, just couldn't love you right. How could I have been so stupid? I wish you could give me another chance, make it last forever this time. Please...forgive me.
I wish I could be a tear, to be born in your eye, to slowly caress your cheek and to finally melt in your mouth. If only wishes could come true...
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Written January 15th, 2006
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this is a sad poem. well written and i liked how u set it out. there was so much emotion in ur poem i was amazed. good luck and keep writin
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this is really sad, but very well-written as well. Thanks for entering my contest.
Jen -
wow...that was so sad
and so amazing.
You are SUCH a good writer for your age....i envy you
love,
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that was devine. so sad, the emotion flew from your words. well done.
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Thank you
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coming your way!
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this poem is hot off the chain u expressed ure self so well wit this poem u got goin here full of emotion wow u done a marvelous No beautiful job on this poem wow loved it amazin bravo keep up the wonderful work Peaches
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"Sad little girl"?! Thanks...! I forgive you though, you have my pardon.
Tea? Yeuch! So disgusting and sour! I think it'll do anything but cheer me up!!! lol
Yeah, love sucks! Well, what I experienced wasn't real love, just 7th grade "friendship love", if you get my drift...
You're 100% right about the tear thing but what I wrote in my poem is a metaphor. A deep one that my friend told me. You need to imagine what I feel when you read it.
Yes, maybe we are wandering down the rabbit hole...we've got to be extra careful!
@|ice
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Well, Alice, it seems to me like you're just a sad little girl (pardon the expression).
Know what'll cheer you up?
Tea.
Okay, not really, but it tastes good!
I hope at least that short joke cheers you up, even if it's JUST A LITTLE BIT!
Pay much attention to your Dr. Seuss quote, Alice my dear, because it's very useful information!
There are too many love problems these days. But don't you worry! You'll find him! Mr. Right was wrong, but I'm sure if you keep searching you'll find Mr. Perfect. Nothing goes wrong with Mr. Perfect!
A tear's life is short-lived. A tear never knows the joys and pains of actually being loved. It's gone before it actually comes to terms with it's own existence. Is that how you truly want to be? Would you rather be able to feel the pains and sorrows of a bad breakup, but learn from your mistakes enough so that the next relationship is even better than the last?
Or do you want to be so naive as to never know what love truly is?
The choice is yours, dear Alice, and all you've gotta do is choose.
Maybe we're all wandering down the rabbit hole?
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yea, small world
no probs
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ooh. ya name's alice too huh? lol
fanx xxx
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wow, this hit me so hard, it just made me think about love and pain in general. I love this write Alice!! keep it up!
luv Muffinlady a.k.a Alice Lol
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Wow... that is so sad... youre still very much into the
mood lol. This is really raw pain... Really well written.
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