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Every Picture (Doesn't Justify)




Every picture of you and me
Doesn't justify how we should be
Even after everything
I'm still here, I'm still waiting.

After so long, should we really
End on this note, such tragedy
I couldn't help myself from
Finally telling you my thoughts.

You couldn't contain yourself
Secrets are things you've never known
And you say you tell me everything
But now I think that's changing

I can't just let you go
We've been through
So much more than this,
This one incident.

I wish you would've done more
And I wish I could have said
Everything I kept hiding
All the feelings I repressed.

Here we are, still together
Things are different now
And I think they'll be forever
All because of us...

Not talking, not even whispering
Not thinking it's not okay
And never just once considering
That we could die one day.





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Written January 15th, 2006

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  • brokenpoet
    June 29
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    I think this is beautifully written.
    I also know deep down in my heart you have written at least something since Jan. of 2006 and I think all of us at allpoetry would love to read it Jen.
    (Not that you have to post anything if you don't want lol)

    (I've read again)
    but nah, really, I enjoy reading your work, it's refreshing.

  • brokenpoet
    April 29, 2007
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    You know. It's been a while since I've checked out your poetry. I hope it's okay I decided to check this out. It looks like it's been a long while since you've written in here.

    This is a sad, piece, it really hit home with me.

    Dude, I remember some of that stuff you wrote in Creative Writing, it was so good.

    Well, have a good day,


    Melissa


  • Rilly
    March 14, 2006
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    wonderfully amazing

    i think this is like w0w.
    alot of these feeling's im feeling right now actually.
    it's wonderful. im adding you to my favorites so i can read more of your work at a later time.
    beautiful write