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Friends In Winter

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Snowflakes drift upon the meadow
an old friend is back once again
haven't see you since last winter
it is so nice to see you my friend.

The ground blanketed in white
foliage is so very hard to find
your carrot nose looks so tasty
could I have it, would you mind?

You seem to have so many noses
each year a new one grows I see
how does that happen my friend
please tell, is it done magically?

My red nose is very special too
it is one of a kind as you can see
I guide a sleigh on Christmas eve
helping Santa is where I will be.

We are friends with special noses
each one helps in a different way
you provide food in the snowstorm
in the snowstorm I guide a sleigh.



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Written January 15th, 2006

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  • jasminerose gold member
    January 18, 2006
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    excellent

    Oh Sandy as usual a beautifully penned poem!! Excellent write my friend!! I loved this...thank you for the smile this morning! Best wishes to you in the contest! Linda

  • whispersoftly
    January 18, 2006
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    this is a beautiful write so touching and heartfelt very well done and good luck you have made me smile xx Cheryl
  • InBetweenThoughts gold member
    January 16, 2006
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    As I try to read all the comments when I have time this was unique and caught my eye as you not only commented on the entree, but also took the time to compliment the contest holder...Thank you your thoughts have brought a big smile to my face and have made holding this contest that much more rewarding......have a beautiful day, Ken IBT
  • InBetweenThoughts gold member
    January 16, 2006
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    Hello Sandy, this poem was beautiful you did a wonderful job with the story within......creative, cute, rhyme and flow right on as it always is. Thank you for entering your lovely write...Good luck , Ken IBT .......by the way did Frosty give up his nose, lol?

  • CountryCousin
    January 15, 2006
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    Written very well and cute.

    I like the fact that the deer wants to eat the carrot. This is really a nice poem that you wrote and I love the snow in the background as well. The picture was really neat and I think the host did a good job of posting that picture. Best of luck in contest.
  • AnoushkaRustagi
    January 15, 2006
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    A Lovely Poem

    Hi Sandy, A very nice and soft poem. I enjoyed it very much as a reader spl "We are friends with special noses
    each one helps in a different way".a very true statement that each friend has its own place in life and no one cant replace anyone. Background is fantastic as always and poem is BEAUTIFUL,HEARTFELT to read. best of luck in the contest.

  • KevinDunn
    January 15, 2006
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    A nice and original poem that works well.

  • poet2angels silver member
    January 15, 2006
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    adorable

    How lovely, Sandy......"friends with special noses" How adorable!..Lynda
  • Buchan
    January 15, 2006
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    excellent

    What a unique beautiful and sweet poem..Loved the snow flakes.Great flow of words expressing a joy in the sinple things
    Thank you for sharing and writing such a nice poem.
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