Hold me in your arms and let me feel
The warmth of your comfort
And southern hospitality
Whispered desires remain unspoken
Two souls dance entwined
In the time it takes to blink
Love can be found
Twisted and wrapped around ideals
That only you can quell.
Author notes
new write, on the spot, as your option requested. it said anything and I happened to be in a semi romantic mood 
Written January 14th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- ~*Raneika's Contest For All*~ by Ms Raneika.
300 points, ended February 22, 2006, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Short and sweet write...you two make a cute couple i wish you the best in life...you sure know how to write a poem...thanks again for your entries much love Raneika
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thanks, I enjoyed it too, so did my sweety! the write did not place, but my prewrite the trembler, did for a 10pt honourable mention
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You two look wonderful "wrapped around ideals". This is warm and cuddly. Very nicely penned little sis. On the spot is pretty good for this romantic musing. I am loving this.
The best to you in the challenge!
All My LOVE,
Renee ♥ -
ahhh. short, sweet and to the point. So very few words yet the feeling and emotions come across strong.
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this is so sweet! My heart aches for you! Keep it up.
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Absolutely beautiful and sweet!
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sweet wonderful love
that we can hardly believe
acts as a generous muse
and spells beauty
like this -
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WoW great and sweet porm if thats you guys together it cute -
lucky guy
all I can say is lucky fellow and the usual 'i'm jealous!'
good luck in the contest. You're a winner in my books dearest
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