Watch the blade.
Slowly roll down.
His plastered smile.
Becomes a frown.
She drowns in the hate.
That he has placed.
From all the problems.
She has faced.
She screams his name.
To place the blame.
As she dies.
It begins to rain.
Tears of guilt.
He's left ashamed.
Taunted by silence.
He's finally framed.
Take the fall.
It's all on you.
You drove her crazy.
But she'll never be through.
Blaming you daily.
Taunting your nights.
Reminding you vaguely.
Of every fight.
Take her body.
Dig a hole.
Try to hide.
Her broken soul.
You will rot in hell.
With a diminished face.
Your mind will decay.
And be rapped in bloody lace...
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Written January 14th, 2006
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i agree the periods are unnecessary, but i dont give a shit if you think killing yourself to get revenge is stupid b/c i would never do it; i wrote this about a freind that did this so if you think its immature fuck you b/c telling her that aint ganna bring her back and i am plenty grown, i just actually like to write about things that mean something to me rather than making up a poem or story in my head about something that ive never gone through and tryin to make people know what im talking about when i dont. thx for the comment...
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the periods are unnecessary. itd be better without them.
the poems, well bland. the truth is, killing yourself to make someone else feel bad is pointless, not worth it, and youll never know if theyre unhappy or not. and all in all, its..immature.
i think as you grow up your poetry will too, and it will be a lot better.
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