They were two cute puppies
named Yankee and Doodle
they went to town eating
grandma's apple strudel.
It was on thanksgiving day
about a quarter to three
the turkey was on the table
looking tempting as can be.
Yankee looked at Doodle, he
said, "Do you see what I see"
Doodle said, "Yip I sure do
I am getting very hungry."
Well pulling the tablecloth
the bird dropped to the floor
then this two little thieves
pulled the bird out the door.
Well the aroma attracted
all the dogs on the street
they all sat and devoured
the white and dark meat.
All that remained there was
a drumstick picked clean
then out came their master
with a face looking mean.
He was ranting and raving
could not believe his eyes
my bird was picked clean
by just you two little guys?
Then Yankee and Doodle
were sent straight to bed
to dream of fat turkeys
for they still were not fed.
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Written January 14th, 2006
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Excellent
Hiya,i really loved this poem about the two little dogs.It's put a smile on my face for the rest of the day.Excellent piece of writing.Kenny -
WONDERFUL COMMENT
You always did make me laugh with your comments. I did miss them when you were gone into exile.
Take care, Sandy. 
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ohh poor doggies, sent to bed with no supper lol that is just downright mean of the owner. he should have given them a treat at least
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oops!
i foregot to tell you sooner, you didn't put in the pass-word, if you fail to comply i will have to suspend you
sorry
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That was funny. Thank you for sharing
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Hi sandy,
I am laughing now , thank you!!!!!
What an adorable poem. Poor babies didn't get any turkey. I love the poems I have read here about the dogs. So refreshing.
Excellent!!!!!
God's touch
Jeri -
great write!!
Hi Sandy, great poem as usual!!!! Put a big smile ear to ear for me!! Love the picture too! The little imps!! Best wishes in the contest! Linda 
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the picture is adoreble and you have wrote a poem that is just as cute!
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Toooo toooo cute and funny, my friend! Thank you for the smiles; this was wonderful!
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Refreshing... unique... wonderfully crafted!!
Awesome!! Too funny!! Thank you for sharing this wonderfully humerous poem... a true delight!! The world needs more humor thank you for providing it Alas, I am out of applause and this wonderfully crafted piece is so deserving
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I like doggie poems. that was so funny. I loved it. really liked the picture too!
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Cute
that was a very cute and funny poem
very nicely written with an awesome rhyme and flow
there are a couple of corrections, in stanza three, you can say either "Yankee WHO LOOKED at Doodle said" or "Yankee looked at Doodle AND said" also you should put " " marks at the start of a quotation or sentence said or something, also "Doodle SAID...." not "say"
anyway i really liked it and enjoyed reading it very much
so keep on writing
and good luck in the contest
Nooni -
this is good!
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Hi there! I am not reading your poem with obvious reference to the title...yet at least I can be called faithful and man's best friend.
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The poem is sweet and the picture sweeter...beautifully done with those doses of humour that have you in splits....Shubs -
heeheehaahaa! toodlyku I loved it too.
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LMFAO..... this was so funny! I cannot believe you have written something such as this. I have never heard this side of you. This is new. And you know what I like it. Thank you for shairng this. I wish i could write something as funny as this let alone something funny.
~Laura :
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tee,,hee
I love it too! I love little doggie poems anyway cause I have a great fondness for that particular animal. Having said that, the human likeness you added to these two adorable animals was really creative. I used to have a boxer, and now I have a minature Austrailian Shephard, both of which I could see being a character in your poem!! They are so cunning and sneaky, well at least they think they are. Good luck in the contest, this was a really cute poem.
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hahahaha! i like!
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