He is a bowl of soup when I'm ill,
And a circle - ongoing with no sharp edges,
He is a teddy, sat waiting on your pillow,
A well fitted bra - close to your heart,
And the calming baby blue.
He is a warm fire on a snowy day,
And the rainbow after it rains
He is the tranquil loch,
And a cheesy chick - flick,
He is a four leaf clover,
A panda - rare and spectacular.
He is your eyes guiding you,
Your voice - sweet and high.
And the watch on your wrist.
He is a warm autumns day,
And your Earth orbiting the sun.
Author notes
About my boyfriend - all in metaphors.
Written January 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- Just Look..! by PlayLikeWeAreInLove.
400 points, ended February 23, 2006, 17 entries
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Great
"A well fitted bra - close to your heart,"
That's wierd, but it totally makes sense once you think about it. Good analogies.
I would applaud, but I'm out of points.... -
aww this is sweet...doesnt fit my contest though, but nice poem!
byz
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