Stop. Don’t think.
Let your heart come out and feeeel your existence.
This is the time, this is the place.
They are staring at you in the face.
This moment is sharp, but not violent.
You see, you hear things you usually don’t.
Tell yourself: “This is life”
And enjoy the instant.
Let your heart come out and feeeel your existence.
Author notes
Ha. Did you feel it? 
Written January 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- Inspiration please! anything goes! by woman onamision.
650 points, ended February 25, 2006, 59 entries
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I like this. You seem to have a lot of talent for your age.This piece is well done and the format perfect for your message -
VERY VERY good
I looove this poem, the structure, the words, everything!! The way you have those spaces between is such a good idea!! The message is really great to! Im impressed!!
Well done!!
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Coooooool poem! I like the way you say you have to "feeeeeeel"! It makes a nice chnge in yuor rythm!!! And as said before, , there's a lot of meaning, with very few words!!! I say I applaud this work! Hourray for you!
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lovlovlov it! ya i felt it! lots of meaning in few words... exquistitely done my friend!
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Hey, that's nice!It really is.i like it.
Best Wishes
~LostMermaid~
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