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Sweet Dreams Sharhzad

I recall at night while I rest waiting for sleep,
Fond memories of you I want forever to keep.
The sound of your laughter and voice so kind,
Etched quite deeply into the depths of my mind.
Your smile is friendly and lights all of your face,
In my heart these memories have pride of place.
Your heart is soft and generous in the extreme,
No wonder you’re essence of my favourite dream.
So remember all the days for the rest of your life,
I’m always here for you in good times or strife.
So Dear Sharhzad my precious sweet little thing,
Thanks for the great feelings knowing you brings.

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Written January 14th, 2006

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 13, 2007
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    Excellent Writing

    Wonderful poem in honor of Shahrzad!
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  • Vernal Bloom
    August 15, 2007
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    Wow, another beautiful poem dedicated to my lovely Shahrzad. This one was pretty good and I see my sis got all smiling after reading this piece. I thank you humbly for gifting others smiles with your words. You must be a nice guy and a great dad for Shahrzad.
    Thanks for sharing this with us

    ~Vernal Bloom~


  • Bazza
    March 6, 2006
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    Thank you for the lovely comment on behalf of both of us.


  • Shakari
    March 6, 2006
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    This piece is a lovely tribute to your AP daughter, Shahrzad. I agree with you all, for she is a gem. It is rare to find someone as devoted to kindness as she, and she is always there to lend a helping hand. She is so modest too. Keep up the great work!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 2, 2006
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    I agree she is indeed a gem..one of a kind I love her as any auntie loves her neice..keep penning your wishes and thoughts..
    Linda


  • superkurd13
    February 7, 2006
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    this is wonderful aswell. She surrounds herself with great writers. Quite fortunate to have friends like yall. This is beautiful.

  • Ellis gold member
    February 1, 2006
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    Wonderful !

    LOVE THIS! love it love it love it Sharhzad is a jewel, a perfect gemstone of the highest value. She is the pearl in the oyster, the diamond in the ground. She is a PURE and WONDERFUL person. She encourages me to write my poems. Thank you Sharhzad. And thank you Bazza for this glowing tribute to her. --Ellis


  • eternalpoet
    January 18, 2006
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    5 Stars *****

    Hello again wise sir...


    I and lady Shahrzad usualy meet at night before we go to sleep, her time is an hour back from ours ... so we usually go to sleep at the same time... well.. i often wish her goodnight but i never got an idea of wishing her in a poetic form... your poem is very fine..

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up... your humble little friend... .... ... ... - vic ( who else? )


  • LifeEndsNow
    January 17, 2006
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    Another wonderful write for a wonderful girl this was really
    well writen i really liked it great job keep it up -kevin


  • Abby100 Mann
    January 17, 2006
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    A BEAUTIFUL PIECE!

    What a beautiful poem of devotion and reassurrance for your adopted AP daughter.I admire the word flow and the repitive lines on the last two lines of the poem.
    Thank you for sharing with me on this site sir.

  • Bazza
    January 14, 2006
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    And it is great to have a daughter at last . After raising Four sons mostly by myself I thought this wish would never happen, so you are a dream come true.


  • Starhiker
    January 14, 2006
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    What a wonderful poem you wrote for Shahrzad here. Great rhymes and great flow, and so full of love. She is a wonderful friend, and I must write her a poem too, soon. You get my applause for this one, Bazza! Jim


  • Iohagh
    January 14, 2006
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    Congradulations, my Pixie and love the world even if you have to start with just you.

  • Ir.muse
    January 14, 2006
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    Dady..dady..dady..you're so lovely. This is really a very sweet piece for me.I love it veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much.
    I'm so proud to have a nice dad like you.
    Shahrzad


  • sara20
    January 14, 2006
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    This is so sweet. All the devotion demonstraded toward another person.


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    January 14, 2006
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    Excellent

    Barry this was another wonderful write of your emotions and feelings. It is nice to have that special person we think of in a dreams and cherish there heart best wishes to you my friend brian.

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