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Dark Whispers

A whisper in the night
Beckons my mind
Drawing me closer
Taking me in
Trapping me in it's claws
Taking my soul to it's gates
An unknown realm
Darkness
Cold
Barren
Alone...



Tortured screams
Heard by no one
All within myself
Evil laughs
Fight to escape
The desolation
Desperation
Pleading
Someone....
Help me-




©2005 StormGoddess

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Written December 10th, 2005

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  • Sunshinegf
    April 22, 2006
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    incredible work on this .

  • -MrsWonka-
    January 14, 2006
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    wow this poem is great. the reader can really feel your pain. i like the sudden ending of 'someone... help me', i think it really gets the point across. Great write good luck in the contest. (ive entered to if you'd like to have a read ) xxlauraxx