She lies under covers
Her body tense and still
Knowing that this lover
Is watching from the sill
He lingers, taking in her scent
From the corner of the room
Pondering his full intent
His desires deep, consumed
Deep within the fire
Stirring in his loins
Controlled by his desire
This lover, he now joins
Removing first the sheet
Tracing her silk-like curves
Skin milky white and sweet
Enticing his primative nerves
Leaning forward, caressing her precious skin
With his tongue, he makes a trail
He feels his wicked grin
As the fangs slowly unveil
The sex-filled scent beckons
As he moves lower yet
Her thighs parting, open
Baring her moistened outlet
He draws back his lips
Fangs ready for the plunge
With razor pointed tips
Into her thighs he does lunge
The crimson wetness flows
Sating his desire
It is then she knows
He is the sexual vampire
©2005 StormGoddess
Author notes
Written November 30th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Kiss of death by Dark Angel 89.
400 points, ended June 18, 2006, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow!
Hey. Another good erotica. I liked how you named this piece and used it in the last verse. SO creative. Good work! -
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Actually, unless I am writing an acrostic or promp, I almost always name my poems after they are written, and it is usally incorporated with a line in the poem. Another old one, thank you for commenting.
Storm
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Thanks for the comments. Glad you've enjoyed. If I find any extras, I'll be sure to send them your way.
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excellent
wow... reads it again... double wow... This is really great. I really love how it rymes. it brings the whole thing together. It has such rythm and it makes me wish i was in love with a vampire. (looks around her for one. where is he?) -
this is my second favorite poem t hat i had to check out
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ooo 0.0 you had me all tingly, i like a good vampire erotica, good luck in the contest
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