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Gothicka

my feelings are dementia
my thoughts drift through the morgue
if there's nothing i can become
then i'll just blame the lord

blood is running from my wrists
and my head's about to fall to the floor
don't you understand the concept of demise?!!
because there's really nothing much more

everything around is dying
and no one is around to see it
i guess you were too fucking lame
to realize that kind of shit

blackness is my life
though I'm so far from the living
hate has buried all my love
and of course I've stopped giving

walking the final plank
so i can fall to the Hells beneath you
would somebody give me my salvation
so that i can actually become true?

i only asked to be loved
or maybe have a best friend
but the wish i made on my last birthday
will never replace my life's end

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Written January 13th, 2006

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  • EvenStarsBreak--x
    March 30, 2007

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    "blood is running from my wrists
    and my head's about to fall to the floor
    don't you understand the concept of demise?!!
    because there's really nothing much more"

    Was my favorite part... good job and thanks for entering my contest.