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You'll Never Know

You’ll never know, but I wish we could.
It’s the hardest thing I’ve ever had to do,
But I’ll turn my face away, pretending not to love you.
The one you have is the one who should.

You’ve been with her since your childhood
I don’t belong between you two.
You’ll never know, but I wish we could.
It’s the hardest thing I’ve ever had to do.

If she weren’t there, in a heartbeat, I would
But I won’t be the cause of her rue,
I’ll pull away, and you won’t have a clue
How it aches to let go of something so good.
You’ll never know, but I wish we could.

Author notes

Silaquil speaking about Killian.

Killian is copyrighted to Yunaleska, and I share copyright of Sil with Opaque Beauty. I think that's how it works, anyway.

ABba, abAB, abbaA. Tis a Rondel. Mhmm.
Written January 13th, 2006

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  • penman gold member
    February 13, 2006
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    Excellent

    Ah, the sad silence of unspoken heartbreak. So very intense and memorable. Leaving it the way you did without a happy ending was even more effective.

  • Naraku No Hana
    January 13, 2006
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    Wow! Wondeful lovely rondel! Love it! Though it's so sad! Dammit! *sigh* Oh well. I just hope Rose won't be MEAN and not let Diente get to Milly when Kill goes for Sil. heh. Now I'm going to continue my jokey (though probably not THAT jokey) argument with Rose about Kill, Mill and Sil.

  • Naraku No Hana
    January 13, 2006
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    No! Cruel! I'm not mean! *frowns then cries* No!


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    January 13, 2006
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    Aw. So so so sad...but she'll get him eventually, since Yuna's mean and wants to make Miliani suffer. *sigh* Ah well. I like angst and I'll like this. Wonderful rondel, darling.