"Don't touch me!" Miliani said in a hushed whisper, pulling away from Diente's embrace. "I don't want anyone touching me ever again..."
Diente's arctic eyes softened into hurt as he watched her shoulders shake from her silent sobbing. "Why?" he asked, attempting to embrace her again.
Miliani pulled away, whispering brokenly, "You're not my brother."
Author notes
Diente belongs to meeee and Opaque Beauty. *nods*
Ain't it sad? 
Written January 13th, 2006
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Well...since you want Kil to be with Sil, Mil's just gonna have to be angsty for a while. I don't know when or how Diente will win her over at all...if he's even able to.
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IT'S SO DAMN SAD!!!!!
OH, THE LAST LINE MAKES ME WANT TO CRYYYY!!!!!
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I am insutled. Hmph! 
And I DO do things I wouldn't in real life, like what I put my characters through AND I'm coping with Rai. Incest is just not my thing to write about, heh.
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You're no fun. That's what rping is for...Doing things you normally can't in real life, after all.
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Oh yeah, blame it on me, will ya? AnyHOO, you know I'm not one for incest, INCLUDING RPing it. Nope. I didn't want them to have a relationship like that at ALL. Just as long as she goes with Diente then I won't cry.
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YOU'RE the one who doesn't want them together. Blame yourself. And Killian won't know because she won't act like that in front of him. She'll be hiding it...until he finds out. And she's not EXACTLY like Laqueda. She doesn't want to die.
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Don't do this to me! Don't do this to Kill! Waaaaaaa! *cries again* SO stubborn like Laqueda. SO so stubborn. It will kill Kill (<---heh, names) if she acts like this. Wonderful little snippet.
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There really isn't a lot to say unless one has experiece with such things. It's alright though. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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I don't know if this has to do with something else, but what i read was good, and i understand it was a Snippet. I normally give advice and my thoughts, and an actualy critical review, but there's not much I can say with a 55 word story.
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It's meant to be 55 words long, which means there will be no more added to it. It's called a Snippet, dear.
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Lmao...Mil doesn't want anyone but Killian anymore....buuuut...Killian is taken! So yes...I'm assuming Diente's being nice 'caaause he really cares for Mil...AND...because Mauve ahs a girlfriend in this one and he's kinda...sad already. *nods*
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Hey grate job only thin when your writing a story you wanna have more then a few lines. but other than that you did an aweosme job and it's comming along
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Awh'.. That's so sad. Like.. Diente's really tryingggg .. To be nice, I'm assuming.. o o; But, I also understand where Miliani is coming from. Not literally, but yes. e e;
A lovely snippet, darling. It, like, would have made me cry.. If I wasn't... so fuckin' hyper. e e;
CLAPPA' MAHN FO' EWE! =D
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