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Before It Even Started

I've been in love
Loved so much I wanted to die
And still
Never felt so much
As when I looked in your eyes

I've wanted to be loved
Wanted it so much
I could have lied
And still
Nothing stung so much
As when you didnt even say goodbye

Because I knew what it felt like
To have the one you love
Let you go
But I never thought it would hurt so much
To have the one you hope for
Never take hold

Author notes

Pretty generic, I know, but it fit the moment for me.
Written January 13th, 2006

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  • Assisted-Suicide
    January 13, 2006
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    this is amazing.... and let me tell ya.... I have felt this way before!!! But hold on.... God will give you strength!
    ~Sarah


  • rindomai
    January 13, 2006
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    bah! what do you mean, "generic"!?!? i like it. perhaps because i know the feeling all too well. interesting little set-up... but really does give it a sort of depressing/longing feel. at any rate, buck up! or i'll have to wear the t-shirt my best friend wore for me over the break: "there are many other fish in the sea".