Your arctic eyes forever haunt me in my dreams
Life has grown melancholy without you
I loved you more than I ever realized, it seems
It is a love I know my family deems
as improper - that I need someone new -
Your arctic eyes forever haunt me in my dreams
I remember your touch back then and what it still means
to us both; that our love was real and true
I loved you more than I ever realized, it seems
Sometimes it feels like my heart might tear at its seams
when I look at our son and see you too
Your arctic eyes forever haunt me in my dreams
And when our son smiles - the way he beams -
I always see you in him through and through
I loved you more than I ever realized, it seems
Other times, I often miss our blissful screams
I think of those things and more in all I do
You arctic eyes forever haunt me in my dreams
I loved you more than I ever realized, it seems
Author notes
I'm giving it all away in poems. 
Villanelle - AbA2 abA abA2 abA abA2 abAA2 rhyme.
Written January 13th, 2006
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She actually chooses to leave him...and she doesn't know she's pregnant at the time. Glad you like it, darling.
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Why does he always have to LEAVE the little bastards?!
But this was SO beautiful and there's so much emotion and imagery and I especially like the 'the way he beams' bit. Yes. Holy crap I LOOOOOOOOVEEEEE this. *bookmarks* Ahhh.
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I like to think ahead.
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this was cute, I almost all caught up now.
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Lmfao. I have to agree that this might by my best one yet. As hard as they are to write, I love villanelles. Lmao. Glad you liked it.
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Awh! This is, like, crazy stalker psycho woman talking about the father of her child! ... ~Blink.~ Not that Kira is ANY of those things, mind you.
And.. Uhh'.. ~Blinked some more.~ Yep.. I don't know what else to say.. e e; OTHER THAN.. I can see a real improvement in your villanelles.
They're, like, better flowing and stuff.. Much better than mine. o o;
SO AHAHAHAH; accept ittttt!!! ~Crazy eyes of mind control.~ -
Oh, you silly girl. How the hell would Zon die? By the looks of this poem, Kira certainly doesn't kill him!
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No no no! I get the son bit but...Zon doesn't die, does he? I'm thinking that and I'm hoping not.
Wonderful villanelle, honey. But I'm to cry if Zon DOES die.
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