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Trying To Find The True Me

And so it begins,
I have come to yet another point in time,
I feel so alone and so cold.
But I know that there is someone there.
But my mind feels so old.
And it has lost itself again
I try to understand my confused self
And I try to find the true me.
But the door is locked,
My mind is closed.
As you try to reach me
I push you and everyone else away,
My mind is starting to play tricks on me again
And my emotions are winning at this game.
My thoughts have been taken over
Only wanting to cry
Where all the rest of me,
Just wants to run and hide.

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Written January 13th, 2006

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  • Kijuki-X
    January 13, 2006
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    Superb.

    Very deep and the inside message is understood clearly and goes along with the flow of the poem. Very well written. Something i can relate to and also a piece of poetry that has somewhat of personality as some I have written. So indeed, excellent.