one day we will leave this place,
far far away,
away from this retched world and its enmity mace,
to a new world where we are no longer at bay,
no more pain,
no more fears,
we will never look back again,
don't look back through black bloody tears...
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not done yet...
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Written January 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- Inspiration please! anything goes! by woman onamision.
650 points, ended February 25, 2006, 59 entries
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I really like this poem... It says a lot to me in just a few lines... Well done... You're very talented
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awesome....
peachs and pearls and things unknown
sit by the phone. sit by the phone.
I know.......
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this is great! great job! love it! keep it up.
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This si awsome!! Great work. Keep at it.
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WOW!! this is awesome.. i love it.. you did a very great job writing this.. its awesome.... keep up the great writes!
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wow this is sooooooooooooooooo gret already tell me as sooooon as you finish plz if you can i would really liek to know thank thanks for sharing gerat write hope to hear the rest or another poem from you soooooooon
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