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Contest poem
Written January 12th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Sephiroth Lost
    January 13, 2006
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    The teacher was trying to teach words beginning with letters.

    "Who can give me a word beginning with "A"?

    Johnny shot his hand up.. but she called on Mary.

    "Apples taste good" rang out the sweet toned voice.

    Thus it went on until the teacher got to "I" Johnny was by now squirming and wriggling in his seat so she called on him..

    "I is.." he began only to be interrupted by the teacher.. "I am.. I is is very bad grammar.." Johnny shrugged and changed the sentance...

    "I am the ninth letter of the alphabet"

    Reb.


  • onleethestrong
    January 13, 2006
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    Thank you all for your comments... When entering this contest I really wanted to come up with a letter that really represented me. I couldn't think of anything better then I....
    All the best,
    Mandy


  • eternalsuicide
    January 12, 2006
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    awsome! i agree with these fien people. lol. I is the perfect letter for this contest


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    Not a more perfect letter to choose!...good luck!...Lynda


  • DarkenedAuras
    January 12, 2006
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    I love you
    I despise you
    I hate this
    I like that
    I want everything
    I need nothing
    I is great for this contest


  • down without you
    January 12, 2006
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    I agree... what a good little poem, short but sweet, straight to the point, love your use of language in this... nice back ground, contrastin black with white... this is deep i tell u... lol loves it... this is a brilliant contest lol. well done on a fantabulus write... x dwy x

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