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Killing Vow

Melodic cries spill from our lips
as we move in a euphoric daze
I'll wipe that smile from your face
with one of my blades' sharpened tips

My mind set through the series of nips
You will die without a trace
Melodic cries spill from our lips
as we move in a euphoric daze

I'll not rest until your blood drips
for my blade to finally taste;
to be rid of that haunting gaze
The last time you'll be between my hips
Melodic cries spill from our lips

Author notes

As always, Sharazon belongs to her.

Rondel - ABba abAB abbA rhyme.

Though...the rhyme scheme kinda...got fucked up and I'm only just noticing this now. x_X;

Melodic cries spill from our lips
as we move with euphoric bliss
I'll wipe that smile from your face
with one of my blades' sharpened tips

Double-U-Tee-Eff was I thinking?
Written January 12th, 2006

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  • crimsonshadow
    January 13, 2006
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    Perhaps you can have sex with pieces. If you're creative enough.

    I heart this. Probably because it's all angry sex like. Oh, if only she knew....

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    January 13, 2006
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    You can't have sex with pieces.

  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    January 13, 2006
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    blades, I love a poem with blades. Would be even greater if there was someone being sliced into many various bits

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    It's during the time where she's still set on killing him...even though she's his lover at the time. =3 She'll get over it...even if Zon doesn't want her to. He might give her a reason to want to kill him now and then anyway.

  • Victoria of Aragon
    January 12, 2006
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    Lmao; okay! I'm almost doneeee.. Giving you something dumb to laugh at. o o;

    Kira seems.. Kinda' angry in this. Maybe her and Zon could sit down.. And talk about their issues.. Lmfao. ;> > So they could become a stronger couple. ♥

    .. Except, Zon would TOTALLY be into the whole.. Kira trying to kill him in his sleep.. even if they were on good terms, so scratch that. < <;

    This was bee-yew-tea-fool, darling.

    ~Twirl; twirl; twirl; fell on her face; giggle; scampered away.~

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    Hate-love relationships are magnificent.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    heh heh. Great great poem! Love it. Especially with the affection for him as well as the hate. It makes it all the more better.
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