Roses are red, hearts are black
Soul’s full of lead, mind’s gunna crack
I love you, I love you not
If you only knew, what I haven’t forgot
Roses are red, hearts in two
Signs I never read, what a fool
I should of known, I should of guessed
I’d be left alone, scared and depressed
Roses are red, hearts will break
Everything I said, was all a mistake
I did it once, now I’ve done it twice
I fell in love, and I paid the price
Roses are red, hearts are blind
I didn’t look ahead, to what I might find
Now my hearts broke, shattered and smashed
You think it’s a joke, that my life has crashed
Roses are red, heart doesn’t beat
Your gun to my head, I admit defeat
Roses are black, hearts are red
I don’t want you back, our love is dead
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Written January 12th, 2006
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Roses are red, heart doesn’t beat
Your gun to my head, I admit defeat
Roses are black, hearts are red
I don’t want you back, our love is dead
Wow, that just like sent shivers down my spine, you didnt turn up on my favourites though for some mad reason.
This poem was so so well written. I like how in the first two lines of each stanza you make each word like rhyme. I loved it, it really kicked ass! I agree with Jessy Cakes, you can tell alot of thought went into this. The alst stanze was my favourite, ace poem it deserves an applause!
Love ya bitch!
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This is ace my lil lozzy, great rite. this is a ace poem you can tell youve thought about it alot. the ending is amazing. well done my lil chicken...
keep up the ace writes,
love you baby
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Yey!!!!!! go Lauren, you kick ass, this new poem rocks, i love whole roses are red n stuff theme, works well. the ending is awesome aswell, weldone!!!
keep rockin mah chick xXx love ya xXx -
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What a beautiful poem, I don't know how true the poem is but whether it is or not you have really put these words together where I could acually believe it, you really have a way with words.
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