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Lords of the Night. (Revised)

The Vampire sleeps the day away. Then Awakens at sunset. They look for there victim of the night. Then go back to sleep at the first sign of day brake. That's is there cures. Until one of them gets tired of living for ever, and wants some one to end there Suffering. Those are the murders that the victim was in-golfed by flames. If you are pure of heart, you will not see any kind of vampire. If you are pure in your religion you will see the same amount as some one that indulges in vampireism. I cant count how many vampires I have seen & not realised what I was looking at. I can say one thing for vampires. Vampires are not creatures that you want to mess with. There dark and miss-understood. For Very good reasons. They lie to git your trust. They look beautiful to attract you, to make you long for there bodies. Its all a lie. To tempt you. To make you drop your gard, and lose site of what you really love. To laure you into there trap. Be safe, look over your shoulder. One mite say that I indulge in the dark life, But I'm just going on knowledge I have ganed by watching every one.

Just imagine what other people will do for love.

Author notes

This is a Revised poem. Its also the 36th poem titel I've worked on.
Written January 12th, 2006

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  • blackfang4318
    October 24, 2008
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    WOW

    I LOVE THE POEMS AND THE THEME THAT YOU HAVE GOIN FOR IT


  • Zaria WindSong
    February 16, 2006
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    I loved this very much.


  • The Inigma
    January 30, 2006
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    Very good poem.

    Good Poem. Nice And Dark. I thought you had lost the dark side of ur mind. I love Vampire poems, Being a vamp my self, I feel that this is a good poem


  • Fire Fang
    January 30, 2006
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    so, u sayin' u a Vamp'?


  • January 28, 2006
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    Wow! this is cool. i love reading about vampires and understanding more about them! Cool.

  • Naraku No Hana
    January 12, 2006
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    Cool write. Vampires! I really enjoyed reading this. Great write.

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