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Dreamsmith of Aspiration




All that is dreamed is filled with aspirations
insights and perfections realized only in hope
sensual ideals that leave hazy desires
in flights of ambition, distant, remote.

A dream filled with fountains of sweet reverie
absorbed in your moment, immersed in your trance
one would wish it one's destiny
to dream in abstraction and wake to romance!

Visions of nighttime delusional fables
engaged in the creation of legends and myths
one available man, one available woman
in the perfect world of a sleepy dreamsmith!









from Virtual Muse #4: Dreams  [Column] by lavender shadows

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Written January 12th, 2006

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  • out-of-ink
    January 18, 2006
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    i like...nice use of exclamations. lots of meaning in few words!


  • lavender shadows
    January 13, 2006
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    First off... you have a collection of me?! Wow, now that's an honour & a half!

    Now onto the write...

    This is all around simply gorgeous! I really love what you've done with the prompt, making the poem belong to the words. What's really intriguing about this piece is that you can take it from two unique perspectives: reality & fantasy. You could be living this dream, or you could be dreaming this dream. OK, perhaps that didn't make as much sense as it did in my head.

    In any case, this is truly beautiful. I love this!

    Lavender, who must go off to dreamer's land soon



  • January 12, 2006
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    Always the best!

    Wow my brother, what a wondrous poem you have here...
    Please tell me my brother, do you dream like that? Or this is just one of your excellent creation in terms of your poetic ability to its best! I think you are romantic my dear brother, and your words, I can only dream about!
    So wonderful and purely exhilarating!
    Love it!


  • wbiro gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    thanks, suseann, now time for this sleepy dreamsmith to seek his dreamy legendary romance... in dreamland! lol


  • suseann
    January 12, 2006
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    I dream to distraction myself.HA! But you dream wonderful dreams of lucidness far more poetic then I can nefew.This was purly! So legendary romance is in your wishes.And I wish this for you poet.~~~Suseann

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