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Baby Soft

 

The softest thing I've ever felt is a newborn babies skin,
Nothing soft compares to under a tiny infant's little chin.
Or the nuzzle of a sweet cheek asleep against your chest,
and soft wet kisses with wide open mouths are the best.

Nothing softer than my heart, when I hold a tiny hand,
those itty-bitty fingers hold my heart in their command.
Sweet infant's innocence softest thing I've ever known,
my hubby’s skin is second softest even though he’s grown.

 

What compares to feel of nude human's skin combined?
For me it's one of greatest pleasures in life I could find.
I feel protected, I feel loved like that tiny innocent child,
the human touch means so much, so soft, so sweet, so mild.

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Congratulations on that beautiful little boy! I don't know how well this fits your contest, thought I would share and let you decide.

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  • Gigi Lombard
    September 29, 2007
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    Beautiful write
    Thank you for the entry
    Good Luck!
    G


  • honey bear
    July 22, 2007
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    thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this beautiful write


  • DawnBaby
    January 27, 2006
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    Appreciated

    Thank you very much, I am so very pleased to have won. Great contest! Thank you so much for the Gold trophy and your kind comments, each very much appreciated! Thank you!


  • GoldenEssence
    January 27, 2006
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    Absolutely astonishing! An amaizing picture created and a lovely flow as well! You are an amaising writer!

    Good luck
    Grace


  • DawnBaby
    January 14, 2006
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    Appreciated

    Back at you Sonja! Thank you very much for your applause! Thank you my poet friend!


  • Sonja
    January 14, 2006
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    Perfect!!!

    I am not sure what to say. I think that my applause is talking much more.
    ~Sonja~


  • DawnBaby
    January 12, 2006
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    Thank You

    Awww, thank you so much for taking the time to read, I appreciate your time. I thought I should add one more verse, it somehow felt undone. Glad you approve, I know you read it earlier too, so thanks so much, nice to have input, and I really do appreciate it.


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    Such a beautiful picture to go with this sensational poem - lovely words describing something soft - a baby, a husband's skin. Husbands in love can be the softest creatures ever, their eyes just look at you and causes you to mel. Liked these verses.


  • DawnBaby
    January 12, 2006
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    Very Appreciated

    Sorry myself, guess I am not used to so many adjectives! If you meant it, then I am very humbled. I apologize profusely! Thank you so much kind Sir for your kind comments!


  • Dawrion Darklinmoon
    January 12, 2006
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    it wasnt sarcasum, im sorry if you toke it that way, when i think a poem is great and i love it and add it to m bookmarks i post those words as encourgment sorry for the misunderstanding.


  • DawnBaby
    January 12, 2006
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    ?

    Why the sarcasm? "Nice, neat, fantastic, magnificent, excellent, terrific, groovy, superb breathtaking, amazing, astonishing luminous, talented dazzling, virtuoso, inspired, skillful, gifted, exceptional, accomplished, and need I say more?"


  • Dawrion Darklinmoon
    January 12, 2006
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    loved it, great, good, yay, ok get my point .

    Great, wonderful, good, all right okay, congratulations, good going, keep it up, brilliant, cool,
    Nice, neat, fantastic, magnificent, excellent, terrific, groovy, superb breathtaking, amazing, astonishing luminous, talented dazzling, virtuoso, inspired, skillful, gifted, exceptional, accomplished, and need I say more? : D


  • DawnBaby
    January 12, 2006
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    Always Appreciated

    Hey there shubs, it has been a while since I have seen you, glad to see you now Thanks so much for your kind comments, when trying to think of the softest thing, a baby is the first thing that comes to my mind. Again, thanks so much for your kind comments.


  • shubs
    January 12, 2006
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    The innocence of a new born baby and the environment it comes from makes it the softest thing to feel and touch and your poem epitomises this aptly and then me the reader can actually recollect the joy of cradling a new born baby and the happiness it gave me whence I was down..cheers Shubs


  • DawnBaby
    January 12, 2006
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    Thank You

    Aww I so appreciate your kind words, first thing I thought of was a baby, so I ruminated a bit and wrote this. Thanks for your kind comments, I very much appreciate them.


  • DawnBaby
    January 12, 2006
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    Very Appreciated

    Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and review, I so appreciate your time and kind comments. Thank you!


  • Gutierrez
    January 12, 2006
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    Outstanding

    You captured the exact thoughts of this contest... I tried to enter earlier... But I couldn't think... you nailed this right on the head... You deserve to win! This is a fantastic poem... So short... But so much more meaning the shorter it is...


  • Tarja
    January 12, 2006
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    Aww.. sweet poem. I agree with every single line, including th elast one. I love babies and I love this!
    AMANDA


  • DawnBaby
    January 12, 2006
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    Appreciated

    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment and also for the applause it is very much appreciated, so glad you liked my write, what is softer than a baby?


  • XxRaDiAnTtRaGeDyXx
    January 12, 2006
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    This has got such wonderful imagery. Great write!

    xXxChristinaxXx


  • DawnBaby
    January 12, 2006
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    Appreciated

    Thank you so much for your kind comments and review, I very much appreciate your time, so glad you enjoyed my write, just couldn't think of anything quite as soft as that sweet baby. Doesn't matter whether we are Grandmothers or Mom's. Nothing is softer and sweeter than a freshly bathed baby and baby powder lotion.


  • mzladyt
    January 12, 2006
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    I love this one too. Babies have my heart. I'm not a grandmother yet but this can touch any mom's heart. Very well done.


  • DawnBaby
    January 12, 2006
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    Appreciated

    I am a Grandmother, so we do have the same heart, I really mean it, you know how soft they are! I agree nuzzling their sweet little necks and with softer than heaven downy hair. Nothing I have ever felt was quite so soft. Thanks from one Grandmother to another!


  • nichtmich silver member
    January 12, 2006
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    Inspired

    You know how to touch a Grandmother's heart and your words have certainly touched mine (my favorite is nuzzling the nape of the neck, that soft downy hair and satin skin This poem creates beautiful images for me and for anyone who's ever held a sweet baby in their arms. Kudos to you girl!

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