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Wintery Wings In Flight



Wintry winds drift across frozen fields~
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Icy scene of silent snow fall still.
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Nature's blanket of wintry wonder~
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Tumble down obscuring memory of summer.
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Earth bound sparkling powder from the sky~
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Replenished feathered wings of angels in flight.
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                       ~~Suseann~~ *

 

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Written January 11th, 2006

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  • Samplette gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    A picture I love watching out my window. Thank you for entering.
    Sam

  • maheo
    January 17, 2006
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    great write

    I think the background is a must have for this, it makes everything so tangible


  • suseann
    January 15, 2006
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    Overcoat,gloves,muffler,boots,electric socks and a hat.Maybe even take a shovel just for good measure Mally my friend.And thanks.
    Edited on Jan 15, 2:31 p.m. because ''.


  • Malabu
    January 15, 2006
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    very pretty susie...I like this very much....but then again...most all I read you write....I love much.....your sucha....tender poetess......that snow is coming down rather quickly......you think I will need my boots to slush around in it??.....wonderful acrostic sweetie......love it
    Huggs
    Malabu


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    FANTASTIC!

    Your wonderful words and this beautiful picture are one.


  • Sherry gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    Oh Suesann,
    Not sure which is more beautiful your poem or the picture enjoyed both of them very nicely written and refreshing. Excellent poem and so soft are your words like the fallen snow. Love and hugs, Me
    Edited on Jan 12, 2:18 because ''.

  • montez gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    Very nice imagery here Chuck - I was tempted to put on my overcoat, scarf and gloves ; the snow is so realistic.
    NB Across would work better in the first line.
    Kind regards,
    Robin.!
    PS Have the clap


  • Lionheart
    January 11, 2006
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    Such a lovely acrostic. I think it would work better with a left alignment though. Nice writing

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