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Absent Minded

'Absent minded!', they scream at me
All throughout the day
But what they don't know is
Dreams are my reality.

'Can't you ever stop staring off into space?'
Why do you always
Interrupt my reveries?
Can't you see the pleasure on my face?

The phone messages I miss
All forgotten in my idyllic realm of fantasy.
Why sacrifice this moment to hell
When I can fill it with bliss?

There is probably something more I could be
And I may be unreliable
But Dreams are my reality
I wish you could only see.

Author notes

I'm not quite good at rhyming, and this poem may not be so great because I have not written anything in a while.  I feel that this poem needs another stanza, but I'll add more when I get over this block.
Written January 11th, 2006

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  • Dark Zen Angel
    May 3, 2007

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    True

    Da mind is an amazing part of our body.
    Our mind is so powerful.
    If we was able to use 100% of our brain...do you know how much damage we could cause!?!
    Next time someone says "Stop Dreaming!!",tell them SHUT UP!...I'm unlocking my brain power.

  • Miji
    January 11, 2006
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    =o Thanks. I just applauded one of your poems before I received yours.. Irony. (:


  • spamwitch
    January 11, 2006
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    Oh how we have missed you!! You still have the same strength believe it or not, I agree that you will probably add to this, but even as it is it is a wonderful poem that brings me back to those days of daydreaming, it was so much more comforting than my reality!!

  • Miji
    January 11, 2006
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    Thank you. (: I am constantly screamed at by everyone, because i can never pay attention or concentrate. I always... drift off.


  • DD Sai
    January 11, 2006
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    Oh sweetheart I see AND understand! Great.

    But what they don't know is
    Dreams are my reality

    This is so true! Same goes for me, hit me right on the nose.

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