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A word in your ear ...






!! Drum !!





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You can't beat it.
Written January 11th, 2006

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  • BethanyBoo
    May 12, 2007
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    i thourt this was going to be a poem. mummy told me what it meant and i think it is funny anyway.


  • EmeraldDreams
    April 9, 2007
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    lol, very clever!


  • shastadaisey123
    January 24, 2006
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    BEAT??? very cool

  • Ms. Trick
    January 16, 2006
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    No...big and loud, but uninspiring.

    Kudos for trying.

    -trick

  • Harlequin
    January 12, 2006
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    Yes.....


  • January 12, 2006
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    clever stuff!


  • Cat gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    ouch!


  • chills gold member
    January 11, 2006
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    Very droll (short for drum roll.....) xx debs

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