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Acrostic *Little*-*Hug*

Acrostic little-

Little-hug I am told is an Irish Pixie 9 years old.
I told Pixie Mommy Sonja does she dance her arms fold.
To which Little-Hug says I can speak for me you see
Twinkling while smiles and eyes while tickling me.
Love you Mommy's hearts drawn upon little leaves
Especially the ones sent by your love upon a breeze.

How safe you will be in Pixieland fairy school
Under the rainbow playing songs as Pixies rule.
Guess you laugh at math but find playing cool.

by Iohagh

Author notes

Welcome our youngest Pixie Ellie of Ireland. You can teach me to speak like my ancestors so we all know something to help each other laugh and play.
Written January 11th, 2006

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  • Ir.muse
    January 12, 2006
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    This is really a sweet piece for our little friend.
    Shahrzad


  • Iohagh
    January 12, 2006
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    For you I say the light is always so bright and keep it in your heart especially at night. Share it with you Mum especially when she's feeling bum and kiss all worries away. That's what we Pixies say. Love the world each day.


  • little-hug
    January 12, 2006
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    thank you so much for this oh wow.... it is so pretty. I am real lucky to be a pixie Thank you thank you thank you Acrostic is my favourite form and I love this one. thank you so much
    Go raibh míle maith agat agus lán grá
    (thank you and lots of love in Irish)
    ellie

    p.s I love your name. Its beautiful

  • Iohagh
    January 11, 2006
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    She will read this but I cannot applaud her because I wrote it. Mommy tell her I love her too my little Irish emerald. Love you both. Ciao.


  • Sonja
    January 11, 2006
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    What a nice verses for our little sweet pixie poetess. I am readin her poetry for a very long time and I was thinking that she is adult because of her mature verses. With this acrostic poem you have done something special for her. She will always be protected under our wings.
    ~Sonja~


  • Iohagh
    January 11, 2006
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    I put your name on so you can change it if you like and recieve hugs and fairy dust as people comment.

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