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The Day After Tomorrow

Two beds and a coffee machine
Between four weary walls.
An imitation of life,
That a faraway voice speaks of;
It is senseless though sensible.
I wonder, how many times, how many lies
Will be told before something beautiful appears?
A thousand words fly like a bird
In to the secret garden,
filled with shadows and tall trees,
Where memories of mistakes
and a painful past sulks.
Hidden, waiting…
Waiting for serenity.
Hopefully, regret will be cured
The day after tomorrow…

Author notes

Song titles and artists in order of appearance

Two beds and a coffee machine by Savage Garden
Imitation of life by R.E.M
Faraway Voice by Katie Melua
How many times, how many lies by Pussycat Dolls
Something Beautiful by Robbie Williams
A Thousand Words by Savage Garden
Fly like a Bird by Mariah Carey
Secret Garden by Madonna
Shadows and tall trees by U2
The day after tomorrow by Take That
Written January 11th, 2006

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  • silverscent gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    Thanks very much GoldIWonder. I really appreciate the positive feedback.

  • GoldIWonder
    January 11, 2006
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    You had an excellent assortment of songs and you really tied them together to create a beautiful poem. Excellent job and good luck in the contest.