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Her One And Only

Miliani smiled as Killian told her the news. It crushed her heart with every second. "Of course I don't mind. You deserve to be happy."

Killian and Silaquil relaxed visibly, smiling back, glad that that she wasn't taking it hard. As much as Killian loved his sister, she wasn't his one and only, like Silaquil.

Killian embraced Miliani tightly, kissing her forehead. "I'm glad you understand, Milly. You'll find your one and only someday."

When they were gone, Miliani leaned back against the wall, sliding down to the floor. Wet trails ran down across her cheeks, her eyes closed tightly. "I already have..." she whispered brokenly. "And I'll never let another touch me again...because no one could replace you."

Author notes

Killian is copyrighted to Yunaleska.
Silaquil is copyrighted to both crimsonshadow and Opaque Beauty.
Written January 11th, 2006

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 11

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    Tragic, heart-wrenching, AWESOME! You amaze me with your ability to set a scene in so few words. I could never do it! So...Milly is in love with her brother? *hasn't followed these characters before*

    • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
      August 11
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      Is it obvious that I have a thing with incest? This was my idea 'cause, like, for some reason, I like the thought of a brother and sister loving each other THAT much...'specially twins, and Milly's in love with her elder twin brother. However, of course it doesn't work out, and she eventually has to get over it...Heh.

  • Victoria of Aragon
    January 12, 2006
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    Lmao.. I'm so lost. ~Blinked all slow-like and such.~ I'm assuming the kids' names that I DON'T recognize are the spawn of.. GODS, I lost their names! .. Those other characters that you and Yuna use. xP Lmfao; yep.. Those one.. < <;;

    Anywhoreeeeee... This is lovely, dear. Very sad, but very beautiful all at the same time. ^ ^; I remember a time when I thought like Mili.. Only.. Not about my brother.. And.. It wasn't 'cause I was in love. e e; BUT YESSSS..

    ~Giggle; twirl; scampered to the next one.~

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    I actually kinda want this to happen now. I just don't know how it will with Killian worried about Mili and Silaquil determined to hide her feelings. I think he should try for Veka first though...not that it will work very well.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    God damn! It IS Killian. There's something wrong with me. I have to fix it.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    January 12, 2006
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    No! Don't be so mean to make her like that! I can't bare another Laqueda! This is great Rose. Though...Raidon? Isn't it meant to be Killian? I don't know. Anyway, woo! So he's going for Sil? Cool. Though, no! I hope Milly goes with Diente or I shall be very very upset. Great write.
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